Dryunya wrote:I thought of a wacky plot to make him take up his father's research to try and cure his deformity.
Mr. Administrator wrote:WE BELIEVE THAT ADAM IS AS READY AS HE WILL EVER BE FOR THE REFICTIONALIZATION PROCESS.
WE BELIEVE YOU HAVE HAVE CORRECTLY IDENTIFIED THE TROPE AS CARTWRIGHT CURSE. IN ORDER TO BE EFFECTIVE, THE STORY MUST BOTH CONTAIN THE TROPE AND BE COMPELLING IN ITS OWN RIGHT.
WE ARE NOT SURE HOW LONG ADAM WILL REMAIN DISILLUSIONED WITH THIS WORLD. BECAUSE THE WINDOW OF OPPORTUNITY MAY BE NARROW, WE DESIRE ALL SUBMISSIONS BEFORE NEXT SUNDAY TURNS INTO MONDAY.
SO MIDNIGHT. THAT MEANS MIDNIGHT.
Lordxana0 wrote:Crap how do you write a good story for him when his trope involves people dying around him...
Mr. Administrator wrote:WE HAVE TWO REMINDERS.
FIRSTLY, ALL SUBMISSIONS SHOULD BE SENT TO ONEABOVETHEWALL@GMAIL.COM
SECONDLY, WHILE WE UNDERSTAND THE APPEAL OF GIVING ADAM A HAPPY STORY, IT MUST NOT BE CONTRIVED. EFFECTIVE DRAMATIC STRUCTURE IS PARAMOUNT, AND PLOT TWISTS MUST BE JUSTIFIED AND GIVEN APPROPRIATE NARRATIVE WEIGHT. IF THIS REQUIRES A STORY THAT IS LESS HAPPY, THEN WE RECOMMEND NOT FORCING IT.
H22 wrote:I... pretty blatantly attempted to prep Adam for refic. Hopefully, he'll listen.
Scarab wrote:H22 wrote:I... pretty blatantly attempted to prep Adam for refic. Hopefully, he'll listen.
I think I speak for everyone involved when I say this is going to suck.
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